Breaking Dawn (The Twilight Saga, Book 4)

The problem with this book is not the happy ending as so many have said. The problem is that the ending is very unbelievable, in part because it is so happy. There is no way that the events in question with the Volturi would have led to a fight. To me the even thought they pulled out of the fight, the rest of the vampires should have stood up for their belief. Meyer could have killed off the Volturi easily and taken out a few of the vampires not involved with the Cullens to help make a more believable ending. But she didn't.

However, this was not Meyer's only problem. The book is comprised of three books. The first two have their own plot while the third has it's own. It lacks a cohesive element. Sure Bella has the nightmares in the first but there is nothing in the second about these dreams so by the time the third book comes around the Volturi story seems to jump out of nowhere.

Lastly everything in this story was predictable. However, I find that is how it has been through the series. Meyer doesn't have the same gift that Rowling has for subtle foreshadowing.

DO NOT READ THIS BOOK. IT SUCKS.
horrible. I've put off reading this last book because of the horrible reviews i read, but now i have realized that it was all true. Meyer slaughtered her plot and characters for her unrealistic vision of how things should be. so many things were wrong with this book.
Bell has become a spoiled, whiny brat with nothing more to do except get in the way and beg for sex.she gets everything. edward has become weak and soft. what happened the lovable bickering? the plot is unrealistic. how the hell can a vampire impregnate a person? this doesn't make any sense. the awful name reneesmee is a terrible name for a baby. no action what so ever. the suspense meyer built led up to poof. so many things are wrong with this book i cant type it all down.
i thought eclipse was bad until i read this book
WASTE OF MY TIME! I WANT MY TIME BACK! GIVE ME IT BACK!
THIS BOOKS SUCKS!

I have never written a review on Amazon before, but I'm about 300 pp into this book and feel compelled to add my two cents after reading other people's reviews and not even sure if I can finish the book myself because I don't like where the plotline is going.

I fully agree with other reviewers who have said that Bella is a selfish individual who acts recklessly and acts without regard to how her actions will affect others in her life, whether it be her parents, the Quiletes, or the Cullens. I know this is a fantasy story, but her mind is beyond warped and she is totally not sensible or in the right frame of mind. I didn't mind her senselessness as much in the first three books because it seemed to be moving the plotline forward, but in the fourth book, after the incubus is conceived, she just seems deranged. It's one thing to be pregnant that young at 18 and I know it's more commonplace today, but to be pregnant with a vampire baby is beyond crazy. I hope young women don't see her as a role model in any way, shape, or form other than to envy her for finding the love of her life.

I was on Team Jacob by the end of Eclipse, but in this book, I don't think she's deserving of either Edward or Jacob. Like other readers have mentioned, what is it about her that they are attracted to in the first place? She doesn't seem to have any redeeming qualities about her other than that her blood smells good to Edward and that she constantly puts her life in danger and others come to her aid. I know she's dealing with mythical creatures and all and that they possess supernatural powers, but I hate how defenseless and vulnerable she's been in all the few books. She should have moved with Renee to Florida when Charlie ordered her to. I'm not a strong feminist or anything, but I wish she'd grow a backbone and say no a couple of times for her own safety and future instead of letting her lust and desire and all-consuming love for Edward determine her actions. I was happier when she mentioned early on in the book that she wanted to go to Dartmouth and be human for at least a few more months, but that obviously that plan went out the window once she found out she was pregnant.

I love a romantic story and all and I was spellbound at first by the Romeo and Juliet nature of Edward and Bella's relationship, but their love is just too out there and abnormal, and I'm not just saying that because she starts out as human and he's a vampire. Bella loves Edward because he's beautiful and fascinating and talented and unbreakable; basically, everything she's not. He originally is drawn to her because of her overpowering scent and he yearns for her blood. Why is Bella never scared of this, at least for a moment? Is that because "love conquers all"? Oh please, give me a break. Their love story would be somewhat more credible if she at least was fearful of him in the beginning and not so completely enamored and in awe of him. I would have liked to have seen perfect Edward squirm and try to earn her love instead of being handed it on a silver platter. Heck, I think Edward would have preferred that as well according to some of the books, but our heroine Bella is just not the sensible type. Fearless she may be, but she totally lacks any rationale.

The only reasons I didn't give this book one star was that I'm not done yet and Meyer's style of writing is certainly compelling as it's only taken me a few days to read all four books in a row, but I am really annoyed with Bella's character. She is totally one-dimensional. And based on other reviews, I am sure I will like her even less as I get further into the story.

I don't understand the negative reviews. If you've followed the series, why in the heck would you have wanted anything other than a wonderful ending that made you smile. It was a perfect ending to the series! Had it not ended this way...with everyone intact and happy...I would have been so disappointed. After all Bella went through in the first 3 books, I am so happy she got her "Happily Ever After!" Thank You Stephenie, for making a 49 year old woman enjoy a young adult series.

I really did not want to review these books until I've read them all. These books are 100% for teenager, that's why the writing is so simple, and the stories so basic.

The books are full of "good" messages for kids and some very bad ones for girls.

Bella is a poor excuse of a young woman that basically wants to please every male ( and up to some degree female character in the story). Just because she loves Edward she allows him to rule her life and treat her like a moron who is unable to make decisions. Except, of course, when she gets pregnant...here Edward portraying probably a tipical guy wants her to have an abortion, but she beign such a good girl decides to carry on with the pregnancy even though it may come with a dead sentence.

On a different note, the writer is very very very repetitive...the lasts 2 books are a waste of paper.